trapped

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Saturday, 19-May-2012 23:46:09

I’m trapped in your lies
Unnerved by your disguise
You open me wide
Plant your poison inside
And as it courses through my veins
You can’t explain
How the pain envelopes my sanity
And turns it to animosity
My patient’s bends
Fragments tearing at my skin
Moments lost to purest black
And I can’t seem to turn back
Lost in the void
Verging on half past annoyed
Turning light into itself
Turning in on myself
All passions left to die
Just as you left me here to lie
Distraught and full of terror
And you were never there
Tearing all my dreams apart
Crushing what’s left of my broken heart
Distance never felt so good
And I never understood
How evil makes its way in
Destroying all I’ve ever been
Locked in chaos bound to kill me
Screaming ever so silently
Time was never on my side
And for you I almost died taking with me all I’ve known
And love that never could I have shown
Little pieces breaking off
Drowning, tearing, what is left
Crushing, burning all of me
But you love to watch me bleed
Screaming doesn’t mean a thing
When no one’s left to ease the pain
And as the door begins to close
I’m left here fighting for my soul
Hear me once, just listen now
Take these fragments, make me whole.

Post 2 by Freedomlocks (Veteran Zoner) on Sunday, 20-May-2012 15:02:22

boss shyt

Post 3 by nicksharpmusic (Generic Zoner) on Monday, 21-May-2012 1:40:54

I really dig the line
"Locked in chaos is bound to kill me"
and the line
"Take these fragments make me whole"
Deep stuff!! What/who inspired that?

Post 4 by YourBoyJD (Generic Zoner) on Monday, 21-May-2012 16:39:00

Holy shit that was good.
Those lines would make an amazing rap song.
Did u make these rhymes?

Post 5 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Wednesday, 23-May-2012 1:19:25

yes, I wrote the entire thing for someone who's name I will not mention. I'm just glad he can't read this.

Post 6 by Lisa's Girl forever (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 25-Aug-2012 5:04:31

wow. powerful writeing.